Showing posts with label Second draft for feature article.. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Second draft for feature article.. Show all posts

Friday, January 15, 2010

Prison

My feature article that you are about to be reading is going to be about PRISON. I think it is unfair that people go to jail for a certain amount of time because of one thing.

There are many things that hurt people in jail. Such as : All the people in there worry about is, Food, water, cigarette's, and survival. One person I interviewed named, James Nesbit said, "When I was in jail all I did was smoke and play cards. I have been in jail since i was 19. In jail I didn't have a opporturnity to do one thing that involved education. I didn't even get to go to college because I was in jail and I'm 36 years old."

One thing that I think hurts people in jail the most is that they also have feelings. Everyone knows that in order to live a good life you have to get some kind of love from someone you love a whole lot. Also that you should always give respect so that you can get respect and you will always have a smile on your face.